Im done
To whom it may concern,
Why do I bother?
Everything I do is wrong.
I bend over backwards trying to help everyone
that I possibly can.
I feel as though when I can finally
see the light at the top of the spiral
staircase, I tumble back down to the bottom.
I am so tired.
I am over ungrateful people.
Is is worth it?
Sometimes I think that I should just give in
and treat others as they treat me.
No more.
I’m done.
I believe that some people aren’t happy unless
they are hurting others.
Sincerely,
Broken hearted me
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This is done for Friday Fictioneers
MY THOUGHTS ON THE SUBJECT ARE AS FOLLOWS 
A case of onward and upward, climb the staircase of life, forgetting those in your past that are ungrateful.
Sometimes it’s just so hard. Thank you.
You are most welcome 🙂 x
If you treated others as shabbily as they treat you, do you think it would make you feel better or worse? I’m betting worse. Be true to who you are. It is always better in the end that way…good luck!
You are right, but sometimes it feels good to let it out.
Oh, I’m all for letting it out! 🙂
What a coincidence, visited this place just today!
Yet we keep on doing the right thing.
Yeah, it’s like tripping on a stone in the middle of your path, slows you down a little, pisses you off a little but the path keeps us going. Whoa, what’s with the analogies today? ha! Happy weekend Dx
Happy weekend back to you!
…some people, yes.
Thanks for reading my rant
Ha! Always.
Ahh Stroy of my life. I love it Deana!
*story
I just dont understand some people. Thank you for reading.
This is true but as we good people know we kill with kindness. Impressive as always.
Thanks. I wish, just once, I could let someone have it. It would probably make me feel worse.
Your words, they have power.
Thank you my friend!
Very sad. You really pull them along. Nicely written.
Joe, you always make me smile with your comments.
This is a beautiful, sad piece.
We’re studying the book of Hosea this month, in the Bible, and I’ve just learned that Gomer’s name literally meant “I’m done.” Hosea means “salvation.” And in his salvation, she was able to claim the name as “complete,” instead of “finished.” Such a beautiful little redemption story. Your poem reminded me we all need that restoration sometimes. Powerful words.
Thank you so much for sharing that with me. I am thankful that you stopped by.
I’ve been exactly there. You can do it.
Thank you for this!
Never give up on Goodness – just like the Father never does…
YES to this comment.
You are correct! Thank you.
Oh – how that has crossed my mind at times. But- then I think – why be miserable like them. But – if I’m in a mood…well – that just being human. Right?
Sometimes people make it very difficult to be nice. Yet, I do it anyway. Thanks.