MY THOUGHTS ON THE SUBJECT ARE AS FOLLOWS

My truth. My life.

Whisper to me

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Whisper to me your truth.

Tell me not what you think I want to hear,

but what you want me to know.

Let our lives join together as one.

Let me be the love you deserve and

the lover that you desire.

Share with me your everything.

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This is fo 5 sentence fiction

Lillie McFerrin Writes
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24 thoughts on “Whisper to me

  1. That’s very romantic.

  2. It can be hard to get that balance between what one wants to and should hear.

  3. Let me be the love you deserve and the lover that you desire.
    How very true in any relationship.

  4. Beautiful, that moment when you know you can bare your soul…

  5. Loved this line, “Tell me not what you think I want to hear/ but what you want me to know.”

  6. How lovely. Sounds like a wedding vow.

  7. Absolutely perfect, and I couldn’t agree with the words more. This is essential to an in-depth relationship that you want to last a lifetime. So very well done!

  8. This is so beautifully poetic. Wonderful! I love this.

  9. This is beautiful, I really love this.

  10. I’m so glad I finally got the chance to stop by. I truly enjoy your blog. I look forward to more when I catch you on my reader! 🙂

  11. beautiful 🙂

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