Unwelcome Surprise
Dear John,
We have been seeing each other for a year now. Living in different states made it hard, but it’s worth it to me.
Last week I flew up to surprise you. I saw you out walking with your pregnant wife. She looked very happy holding your hand. Don’t worry my love, I’m not mad. I know that she has trapped you into this situation and I want to help.
You will love what I have come up with. Soon, our problem will be gone and we can spend the rest of our days together.
I love you so much,
Me
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This is a fiction post written for Jenny Matlock : Saturday Centus – Week 156
MY THOUGHTS ON THE SUBJECT ARE AS FOLLOWS 
wow, this seems like a real, non-fiction letter. really well executed.
Thanks babe!
Eek!
I know!
Holy snot! Priceless! Perfectly psychotic! I love this! I kind of want to print and frame it with a picture of an innocently smiling face right next to it!
This could be the beginning of a novel, Bo…it the end!
I LOVE it!
And you!
You are so good to me! I had fun writing this. Sometime I shock myself at how crazy my mind can get.
Seriously, I love when you stop by!
OR the end, not it the end… Stupid tiny phone keyboard…
if I were John, I would feel very uneasy. what a letter.
Me too! He might want to consider relocating.
am so glad my name is not John … your creativity with these prompts simply surprises me (ok maybe wrong word to use considering this story) 🙂 Well done Deana!
Thank you! Your comments always make me happy.
Great job!
Thank you girl!
Whoa! What the book or movie is this? What will happen next…?
I want more! 😉
I should do more! It was fun. Thank you for reading.
Fantastic. What does she do? WHAT???
hmmm. Maybe I will write more!
Oh my! Delusions I think!
Blessings
Exactly! Thanks Beth.
haha…Fatal Attraction. Well done!
Thanks Maggie!
Yikes. Many scenarios are possible here.
So true! Thanks for reading.
Oh, creepy! I love it!
I’m glad you stopped by to read! Thanks to you.
Yikes!! Sounds like she is up to no good, ha.
She is! Thank you Viki!
This is awesome! I soooooo wanted to find out what her solution is… LOL
I’m so glad you liked it! Thanks
Would this be population control . . . two at a time? Yikes.
That’s what it sounds like! lol. Thanks
I marvel at the stories that occur to you 🙂
Thank you my friend. Sometimes I scare myself.
Let’s write a poem on that.
I would love to! Do you want to start?
🙂 That’s already a start. I’ll continue from there…
sounds good to me!
The plight of the delusional? Well executed Bo x
Thank you so much! I love writing the creepy stuff.
Yikes! The beginning of a mystery/thriller tale, to be sure.
I’m thankful that you stopped by and glad that you liked it!
Very creepy, in a maniacal stalker sort of way. *shudder*
Great! That’s what I was going for!
Yikes!!!! This scared me a bit (I had to check and make sure I wasn’t pregnant). 😉 Otherwise, I lovvvvvve it, my friend. ~ Always, Bobbie
haha. Thank you my sweet friend!
I’m also reminded of a guy I worked with who posted a note on facebook that his girlfriend had accused him of stalking her. Ha! Well a side note was that she wasn’t actually his girlfriend (yet). 😉
oh, that’s crazy! lol
Oh, ominous and scary! 🙂
Oh this is good, but I get the feeling he won’t like her surprise for him.
I don’t think he will! Thanks Sarah.
Oooh.
Revenge.
But, hey. Don’t hurt the baby, okay?
This was a neat twist!
Great creative writing.
Thank you so much!