Passion Fire
Golden Dust colored bricks surround the fire burning brightly.
The smell of lemon lavender wafting from the candle’s
that are staged on the mantle.
Half empty plates and empty glasses of wine
shoved out of our way.
Shoes, shirts and enticing lingerie
thrown over the nearby settee.
Your lips begin where my lips end.
Your hands caress every inch of my lower back.
Your eyes devour me, consume me.
I feel myself melt into your sensuous perfection.
Our bodies combin in splendor as we tangle ourselves into
the blanket that started out beneath us.
Our love consumes us both.
This was done for #100words @velvetverbosity
The word is :Dust
MY THOUGHTS ON THE SUBJECT ARE AS FOLLOWS 
D, you really do have a knack/talent/awesomeness for poetry.
Your ability to convey what I’m going to call a schmorgashboard (spelled phonetically for reading pleasure!) of sensory stimuli is enviable and most impressive!
Maybe I’m a pervert but this is one of my favorites so far 🙂
Wow. Thank you so much! That is really nice to hear. Its comments like this that help me keep the confidence to post my work.
glad you and your boyfriend are back on good terms.
The way you layed out these words built emotion and heat. awesome.
Thanks love!
You certainly brought me there… Hope there’s a cold shower in the sequel. 😉
Great! Ha. Thanks for reading!
Great sensual imagery. Really like it. Have you thought about the “ing”s? “Caressing,” “devouring,” and “consuming” might be even more powerful without. Just my 2, even you don’t mind.
dk
Great advice! I changed it…. Thanks
Wow … it was really full of passion … lovely !!!
Thanks! I was trying for that.
Blazing heat 🙂
Thanks!
candles, fire…ha, that’s not where the heat came from. sounded fun to me.
Thanks Kath! It was fun to write!
*fans myself* indeed.
Thanks Tara!
Whew… I’d like to create a little of that for myself. I know I’ve got candles around here somewhere – and wine –. Sensuous perfection consumed by love… wonderful!
What a terrific comment! I am so thankful that you stop by to read my words!
Well that just sizzled! I like the way you brought in different senses by the way, the touch, view, aroma..
Thanks! I was hoping people would get that!
Thanks! I was hoping people would get that!
It really makes the difference, and reaches me in different ways – signed:Still Smouldering!
Very sensual! This could be made stronger, I think, by not changing tenses when you get toward the end. Example, “I feel myself melt” instead of, “I could feel myself melt”. 😀
Great Point. Fixed. Thank you so much.
Bada-freaking-bing, Bo! Damn, girl! You know how to heat up the page! Passionate, sensual, steamy, and spectacular!
Hehe. Thanks Amy!