Promises kept
One perfect day, one perfect happenstance.
A lingering kiss felt on every surface of my body.
Promises of paradise mixed with laughter and pleasure.
Lives woven intricately together.
You and I combined together for eternity.
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This is done for Lillie McFerrin Five Sentence Fiction
What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week I will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. The word does not have to appear in your five sentences, just use it for direction.
This week: PARADISE
MY THOUGHTS ON THE SUBJECT ARE AS FOLLOWS 
beautiful, I love that opening line
Thank you my love.
beautiful, I love that!
Thank you, Im so glad!
Do you know any good travel agents? I sure would like to visit the kind of paradise you have found. I like what you do with a seemingly simple prompt. I really need to get my butt “out there” and start exploring these prompt sites. Yeah yeah, I say that … Thanks for sharing your wonderful creativity with us Deana.
I am so thankful that you like my words. You kind compliments give me so much encouragement. Thank you so much!
I love it.
Im glad! Thanks
So romantic!
Thanks Rebecca!
Clear, lovely images.
Thank you so much! I love when you stop by!
Perfect!
Thank you so much!
That would be paradise for sure !!!
I agree! Thank you for reading!
Wow just so beautiful.
Very perfect lines these are.
Thank you for the wonderful compliment..
this is lovely. So beautifully created. 🙂
Thank you so much!
Nice weaving of words.
Thanks!
How lovely! 🙂
I’m glad you liked it!
Lance is one lucky man 🙂
hehe. I’m the lucky one!
in that case …you both are 🙂