My truth. My life.

Promises kept


One perfect day, one perfect happenstance.

A lingering kiss felt on every surface of my body.

Promises of paradise mixed with laughter and pleasure.

Lives woven intricately together.

You and I combined together for eternity.


This is done for Lillie McFerrin Five Sentence Fiction

What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week I will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. The word does not have to appear in your five sentences, just use it for direction.

This week: PARADISE

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27 thoughts on “Promises kept

  1. Lance on said:

    beautiful, I love that opening line

  2. beautiful, I love that!

  3. Do you know any good travel agents? I sure would like to visit the kind of paradise you have found. I like what you do with a seemingly simple prompt. I really need to get my butt “out there” and start exploring these prompt sites. Yeah yeah, I say that … Thanks for sharing your wonderful creativity with us Deana.

  4. Clear, lovely images.

  5. That would be paradise for sure !!!

  6. Wow just so beautiful.
    Very perfect lines these are.

  7. this is lovely. So beautifully created. 🙂

  8. Nice weaving of words.

  9. How lovely! 🙂

  10. Lance is one lucky man 🙂

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