I will fight back
I need to tell you that your woman scorned bit is nothing but pathetic.
The fact is he’s my husband. I know this and you know this.
I will fight for what’s mine.
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This is a fiction piece done for trifextra.
This is for Trifecta
You and Kir are making me nervous this week! With all this attempted husband snatching. The first line is particularly awesome.
Really! I havent read hers yet. On the radio they were talking about husband stealing and it gave me the idea. Thanks..
Apparently woman-scorned wants to be woman-smacked-in-the-back-of-the-head.
Ha! So true
She better run-this wife means business;-)Marvelous Deana:-)
Yes she does! Thank you. I love it when you stop by.
Remind me to stay on your good side!! Well done. 🙂
Ha! Thanks
A shotgun with rocksalt can be quite convincing 😉
That’s a terrific idea!
If only people would stay away from what does not belong to them… pathetic is the right word. Good one!
I’m so glad you agree!
Quite a bit of snatching going on this weekend – funny how themes go around. Keeping my distance, just in case!
Ha! Thanks for reading.
oh, SNAP! 🙂
Thanks for reading Barbara…
Very cool Deana. I like a woman that means business, not so fond of the woman that means monkey business with another womans man! Been there, bought the t-shirt… moving on!
me too! Thank you so much for reading..
For the record, you can have him. I don’t wanna fight about it, K?
hahaha. Thanks. That means so much to me.
You either have a vivid imagination or an extensive love history. 🙂 This is so clear.
Or both! Thank you.
That is first person.
Thank you for stopping by to read!
Great write, as always. You and Kir should collaborate sometime.
Thank you for your kind words. It really means so much to me.
as usual a knock out 🙂
Thanks my friend.
Them’s fighting words Deana!
Yes they are! Thanks my friend
I rarely feel sorry for the other woman and I don’t here. She had better watch out.
It is NEVER ok become involved with someone who is married. Thank you so much for stopping by
Yes! I love the sassy, fierce bite to this! Great piece!
Thanks Draug. That means so much coming from you. Congrats on winning. You are most deserving.
Wow I love this! I can feel your determination in your words, so little they can be 🙂
thank you. I love when my feelings come out in my work.
Very real and well written.
Thanks Lumdog.
Hands off is right!!! You and Kir have spelled it out for those witchy ones!
Thanks Gina. I love when you stop by!
Wonderful piece Deana! I really love that last line – so powerful.
Thanks Suzanne. Lipstick can change everything.
Well, then! Nothing to see here! Just move along…
Excellent job setting up a scene, adding conflict, and foreshadowing…all in 33 words!
Thank you so much Tina! What a wonderful compliment.
If intensity was what you were after, I think you hit your mark. 🙂
Thank you Tom!
Wonderful. You stick up for yourself! (Yes, I know it isn’t really you).
If I were in this situation, I would! Thanks
As Loretta Lynn said, Woman if you want to keep this arm you better keep it off my man. annbennett2.blogspot.com
Terrific words!
Grrrr!
Love it!
Thank you!
Awesome
Thank you my sweet friend!
Deana, nicely done, as usual.
Thank you for your kind words.
Yes…fiction… 😉
Thanks for reading!
Nice drama. I do like a good dramatic fightin’ story. 🙂
Thanks Michael
Deana, you have a real talent for scorching with words. Great job!
What a wonderful compliment. Thank you.