My truth. My life.

I will fight back

I need to tell you that your woman scorned bit is nothing but pathetic.

The fact is he’s my husband.  I know this and you know this.

I will fight for what’s mine.


This is a fiction piece done for trifextra.

This is for Trifecta


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63 thoughts on “I will fight back

  1. You and Kir are making me nervous this week! With all this attempted husband snatching. The first line is particularly awesome.

  2. Really! I havent read hers yet. On the radio they were talking about husband stealing and it gave me the idea. Thanks..

  3. Apparently woman-scorned wants to be woman-smacked-in-the-back-of-the-head.

  4. She better run-this wife means business;-)Marvelous Deana:-)

  5. Remind me to stay on your good side!! Well done. 🙂

  6. A shotgun with rocksalt can be quite convincing 😉

  7. If only people would stay away from what does not belong to them… pathetic is the right word. Good one!

  8. Quite a bit of snatching going on this weekend – funny how themes go around. Keeping my distance, just in case!

  9. oh, SNAP! 🙂

  10. Very cool Deana. I like a woman that means business, not so fond of the woman that means monkey business with another womans man! Been there, bought the t-shirt… moving on!

  11. For the record, you can have him. I don’t wanna fight about it, K?

  12. You either have a vivid imagination or an extensive love history. 🙂 This is so clear.

  13. That is first person.

  14. debseeman on said:

    Great write, as always. You and Kir should collaborate sometime.

  15. as usual a knock out 🙂

  16. Them’s fighting words Deana!

  17. I rarely feel sorry for the other woman and I don’t here. She had better watch out.

  18. Draug419 on said:

    Yes! I love the sassy, fierce bite to this! Great piece!

  19. Wow I love this! I can feel your determination in your words, so little they can be 🙂

  20. Very real and well written.

  21. Hands off is right!!! You and Kir have spelled it out for those witchy ones!

  22. Wonderful piece Deana! I really love that last line – so powerful.

  23. Well, then! Nothing to see here! Just move along…

    Excellent job setting up a scene, adding conflict, and foreshadowing…all in 33 words!

  24. If intensity was what you were after, I think you hit your mark. 🙂

  25. Wonderful. You stick up for yourself! (Yes, I know it isn’t really you).

  26. As Loretta Lynn said, Woman if you want to keep this arm you better keep it off my man.

  27. Ruby Manchanda on said:


  28. Deana, nicely done, as usual.

  29. Yes…fiction… 😉

  30. Nice drama. I do like a good dramatic fightin’ story. 🙂

  31. Deana, you have a real talent for scorching with words. Great job!

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