Must find key
Eyes swollen shut
Bloodshot and irritated
You were drunk
I was scared
Handprint bruises
Cover my limbs
Stumbling down
Bag spilt open
I need to find the key
Must escape
Running, falling
Lost shoe
Broken nose
Blood dripping
Oozing cuts
Help
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This is done for :
100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups – Week#79
lovely one!
Thanks
There seems to be a ‘key writing’ flurry happening with the sites at present. This is scarily realistic.
Thank you. Thats what happens when you watch to much scary tv before you write!
Chilling story… really chilling…and well written.
Thank you. Im so glad you liked it.
Loved it! I missed last weeks – better get to getting.
Thanks! Cant wait to read what you come up with!
Very real and tangible.
Thank you for reading.
All I can say is “WoW!” I could really feel the panic in every word.
I agree with this comment. Panic, is a great word. I felt it too.
Thank you so much!
I a so glad that you could feel my emotions. Thank you.
Yes, very scary and realistic.
I am so glad I was able to portray those feelings.
There is a furtiveness here, a desire beyond need, that comes through so clearly in just a few lines…
Thank you for your very kind words.
Powerful and vivid
Thank you.
Terrifying! A very strong story.
Thank you.
Scary! Very well written!
Thank you Joe. Its a scary place to be.
Excellent writing.
Thank you so much
This piece, the way you wrote it in clipped words and phrases, feels so frantic. Just like someone running, trying to escape. Beautifully done.
Thank you Tara. That is exactly what I was hoping for.
This is horribly descriptive. Well done.
Thank you Sarah
Scary because you know it could happen. Gave me shivers.
It could! Thank you,
Succinct yet so explicit…. Well done!
Thank you so much