MY THOUGHTS ON THE SUBJECT ARE AS FOLLOWS

My truth. My life.

Must find key

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Eyes swollen shut

Bloodshot and irritated

You were drunk

I was scared

Handprint bruises

Cover my limbs

Stumbling down

Bag spilt open

I need to find the key

Must escape

Running, falling

Lost shoe

Broken nose

Blood dripping

Oozing cuts

Help

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This is done for :

100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups – Week#79

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34 thoughts on “Must find key

  1. There seems to be a ‘key writing’ flurry happening with the sites at present. This is scarily realistic.

  2. Chilling story… really chilling…and well written.

  3. Loved it! I missed last weeks – better get to getting.

  4. Very real and tangible.

  5. All I can say is “WoW!” I could really feel the panic in every word.

  6. Yes, very scary and realistic.

  7. There is a furtiveness here, a desire beyond need, that comes through so clearly in just a few lines…

  8. Terrifying! A very strong story.

  9. Scary! Very well written!

  10. This piece, the way you wrote it in clipped words and phrases, feels so frantic. Just like someone running, trying to escape. Beautifully done.

  11. This is horribly descriptive. Well done.

  12. Scary because you know it could happen. Gave me shivers.

  13. Succinct yet so explicit…. Well done!

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