My truth. My life.

My Choice…

 When you know that the end is near you have a choice to make.

I made the choice to live.

If I wanted to truly cherish the final days of my life, I would have to let go of my past.

I didn’t care enough about you to let you know that I forgave you.

So I got in my car and drove to my own personal paradise.


This was written for Five Sentence Fiction

The word is Cherish.

Lillie McFerrin Writes

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27 thoughts on “My Choice…

  1. I’m glad you made that choice. Very much so.

  2. Beautiful choice. Beautifully captured.

  3. Very deep. Very intense. Very uplifting view on your last days. 🙂

  4. McGuffyAnn on said:

    Well said. Good choice.

  5. Going your own way…way to go!!! Nice story.

  6. That’s it, my strong, beautiful friend!! Good choice to make!! We all have this choice and it’s heartbreaking to see people go the other way.. ~J

  7. C’est le bon choix que tu as fait chère amie.

  8. Beautiful! 🙂

  9. beautiful and real cherished!

  10. Fleetwood Mac – You can go you own Way..perhaps. Well done.

  11. A very deep, intense piece that is so powerful and beautifully written. xxx

  12. You packed a lot of punch into those 5 sentences. Nicely done.

  13. Ubong Udoessien on said:

    It’s never easy to up and leave! I am sure you are better for it. Nice piece.

  14. Life is tough, but worth it, worth every second, great piece!

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