MY THOUGHTS ON THE SUBJECT ARE AS FOLLOWS

My truth. My life.

Never More

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STOP!

You have destroyed my innocence.

You have murdered my soul.

Everything I once was,

I am no longer.

I tremble in fear

at the thought of life.

My childhood dreams have

become nightmares.

My future belongs to the demons

you have placed inside of me.

When I look in the mirror,

I see your reflection.

Binding me, governing my

every action.

Running brings me no escape.

My every thought belongs to you.

I am no more.

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This was done for Picture it & Write

Picture it & Write is a weekly creative writing prompt hosted by the Ermilia coauthors, Ermisenda and Eliabeth.  We invite you to join in; continue the story or starting your own based on inspiration from the image.  Poetry and foreign languages are welcome, but please provide a translation.  This photograph will be reblogged under Ermisenda on tumblr and added to the Picture it & Write gallery on Facebook and Pinterest.

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29 thoughts on “Never More

  1. I like it. Very good

  2. N’abaisse pas les bras, ne te plie pas à ces démons qui détruisent avec leur méchanceté tout ce qui est beau, tout ce qui est naturel. Combats pour récupérer ton innocence et la beauté de ton âme, ne les crains pas, ils sont tous, et partout, des lâches.

  3. 2old2tap on said:

    Demons inside, relecting in the mirror. There is more story here. Yes?

  4. I love the image!! I was in ballet for 16 years.. I love and miss it very much. I love the piece you wrote as well.. ~J

  5. Darn….! I felt the need to shake him off me…. 😉
    That’s gotta be a good reaction…! 😉

  6. Haunting, particularly as read when viewing the photo prompt. Great work!

  7. Very powerful poem about losing one’s self through what sounds like profound abuse. It was very sad but I must say, I loved it. Thanks for sharing it with us 🙂

  8. nothing quite as heartbreaking as innocence stolen and future hopes crushed by someone else.. could sense the hopelessness in the voice that you used. very well done 🙂

  9. This was chilling … well woven words !!!

  10. Oh my! Chilling!

  11. Raw with the right amount of shivers well done Deana.

  12. It’s petrifying… Arrrgh!
    🙂 Well written! xoxo

  13. Wow, this hits the heart of my Kate character, but in poetry. I really like, “My future belongs to the demons you have placed inside of me. When I look in the mirror…”

  14. Pingback: Picture It And Write – allaboutlemon-All Around, In, And Out Of My Own Universe

  15. Wow, very dark. You gave me goosebumps and I liked the loss of innocence.

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