The Vulture
“Doesn’t it bother you that she’s always around?”
“I told her to back off, you’re the one I want.”
“She’s pathetic”
“And delusional.”
“Now come here and kiss me like you want me.”
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This is for Trifecta:
For the weekend prompt we’re asking for exactly 33 words
of dialogue.
MY THOUGHTS ON THE SUBJECT ARE AS FOLLOWS 
Bossy! 😉
I know right!
That showed her!
yep! Thanks!
She is a hoe bag 😉
very much so!
This has a very real feel to it with a fun twist. Nice one.
Thank you! Im so glad you liked it!
Nice.. The last line conveys so much.. And an awesome title,, so apt! 🙂
Thanks! I liked the title too!
Where do I find this woman? I’ll keep the title in mind.
Im sure it wouldnt be to hard to find her! lol
Nice 🙂
Thank you!
I like this.. I need to get in on this Trifecta stuff.. I wanna play too!!! :0
Hey, D, have you noticed that we have very similar statements under our Blog Titles..? (Smiling…) They are almost the same thing!! ~ Jen
We do!! Great minds, think alike… I would love for you to visit trifecta! You would be good at it.
What is it.. Where is it… am I stupid for not knowing? 😀
http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/
This page will tell you everyting!
Thank you sweet heart!! Thank you!! I will go look.. something to look forward to this weekend!! ~J
Terrific!
The guy comes across as the worst one! And the situation……my my did you get your finger just exactly right on the pulse….
Thanks you. It really makes me happy when you like my work!
Nicely done packing a punch in so few words
Thanks!
So there! Showed her. MMmm. *snaps in a Z*
oh yeah. She got told! lol
You keep gettin’ better ‘n better….!
That was so cute and fun, and so well done…!
Thanks Carolyn! Your comments always make me happy.
The last line was the clincher for moi – well done Deana.
Thank you much!
Nice exchange…and a little affirmation that there’s nothing to worry about.
Thank you!
keep chasing those demons, deana
well done.
Thanks Barbara!
Aha!She sure knows what she wants & how to get it too-my kind of girl;-)Well done Deana:-)
Not afraid at all! Thanks.
🙂
Deana, this was sassy, honest, and real. Great entry! Amy
Thank you so much! This one was fun to write!
Sassy was the word for her. Good one.
Thank you Sandra!
Interesting – this could be expanded in so many ways. Let our imaginations run wild.
Great job, thanks for sharing!
Thank you for reading and commenting. I love it when you stop by!
Whoa, hey, I like where this is going ;D lol
Thanks! It was fun!
Ooooh!!! This was simply delicious. I want to know what happens next!
Thanks! I would love to add on.. Maybe.
I sense a fight in the offing.
Im sure there will be! Thank you.
I also vote for the “What next” chapter!
Very honest, and very real.
Thanks! I just might add on.
Love this! Very feisty! And your title is awesome.
Thanks. I really liked the title as well!
Love it. 😉 Great post.
Thank you!
Whew! (Fanning self) That is hawwwwt!
Thanks!
Girlfriend needs to back the heck up. 🙂
Right! Thanks for reading!
Oh snap!
hehe.. Thanks Tara.
woohoo 🙂
Thanks Christina..
You show her, girl! 🙂
Ha! thanks Sandra.
Someone, or two, is up to no good here. Hussy, and Worm, I’ll call them.
Nicely done.
I like that! Hussy and worm. Thanks!
Steamy! And believable, too. She knows what she wants.
Thanks Christine. Never get in the way of a woman scorned! lol
This worries me – vultures are patient. They are watching out for carrion. The lady vulture may just have the last laugh – or peck. Sorry for the pun. I guess, I am just the overly worrying kind.
You and I think alike! Thanks for reading.