My truth. My life.

The Vulture

“Doesn’t it bother you that she’s always around?”

“I told her to back off, you’re the one I want.”

“She’s pathetic”

“And delusional.”

“Now come here and kiss me like you want me.”


This is for Trifecta:

For the weekend prompt we’re asking for exactly 33 words
of dialogue.



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71 thoughts on “The Vulture

  1. Bossy! πŸ˜‰

  2. That showed her!

  3. She is a hoe bag πŸ˜‰

  4. This has a very real feel to it with a fun twist. Nice one.

  5. Nice.. The last line conveys so much.. And an awesome title,, so apt! πŸ™‚

  6. Where do I find this woman? I’ll keep the title in mind.

  7. I like this.. I need to get in on this Trifecta stuff.. I wanna play too!!! :0
    Hey, D, have you noticed that we have very similar statements under our Blog Titles..? (Smiling…) They are almost the same thing!! ~ Jen

  8. The guy comes across as the worst one! And the situation……my my did you get your finger just exactly right on the pulse….

  9. Nicely done packing a punch in so few words

  10. So there! Showed her. MMmm. *snaps in a Z*

  11. You keep gettin’ better ‘n better….!
    That was so cute and fun, and so well done…!

  12. The last line was the clincher for moi – well done Deana.

  13. Nice exchange…and a little affirmation that there’s nothing to worry about.

  14. keep chasing those demons, deana
    well done.

  15. Aha!She sure knows what she wants & how to get it too-my kind of girl;-)Well done Deana:-)

  16. Sassy was the word for her. Good one.

  17. Interesting – this could be expanded in so many ways. Let our imaginations run wild.
    Great job, thanks for sharing!

  18. Draug419 on said:

    Whoa, hey, I like where this is going ;D lol

  19. Ooooh!!! This was simply delicious. I want to know what happens next!

  20. I sense a fight in the offing.

  21. I also vote for the “What next” chapter!
    Very honest, and very real.

  22. Love this! Very feisty! And your title is awesome.

  23. Love it. πŸ˜‰ Great post.

  24. debseeman on said:

    Whew! (Fanning self) That is hawwwwt!

  25. Girlfriend needs to back the heck up. πŸ™‚

  26. You show her, girl! πŸ™‚

  27. Someone, or two, is up to no good here. Hussy, and Worm, I’ll call them.
    Nicely done.

  28. Steamy! And believable, too. She knows what she wants.

  29. This worries me – vultures are patient. They are watching out for carrion. The lady vulture may just have the last laugh – or peck. Sorry for the pun. I guess, I am just the overly worrying kind.

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