MY THOUGHTS ON THE SUBJECT ARE AS FOLLOWS

My truth. My life.

I am

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Naked and betrayed.

Vulnerable and damaged.

Coerced and intimidated.

Suffocated and constrained.

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I battled all of these afflictions.

I won.

I am strong.

I am a survivor.

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This is done for Picture it & Write

Picture it & Write is a weekly creative writing prompt hosted by the Ermilia coauthors, Ermisenda and Eliabeth. We invite you to join in; continue the story or starting your own based on inspiration from the image. Poetry and foreign languages are welcome, but please provide a translation. This photograph will be reblogged under Ermisenda on tumblr and added to the Picture it & Write gallery on Facebook and Pinterest.

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29 thoughts on “I am”

joetwo on January 19, 2013 at 8:42 pm said:

That is very good! Nice work on the prompt.

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- deanabo on January 19, 2013 at 9:07 pm said:
  
  Thanks Joe
  
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Lance on January 19, 2013 at 9:07 pm said:

sexy and badass. You attacked the prompt. awesome, Bo

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- deanabo on January 19, 2013 at 9:08 pm said:
  
  Thanks my love.
  
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Ermilia on January 19, 2013 at 9:24 pm said:

Lovely poem, I like the victorious tone that mine clearly lacked.

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- deanabo on January 19, 2013 at 9:30 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much! I enjoyed yours very much.
  
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  - Ermilia on January 19, 2013 at 9:30 pm said:
    
    Thank you 🙂
Anne Schilde on January 19, 2013 at 11:08 pm said:

You pulled some of the same feelings from the picture I did. I liked the survivor at the end.

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- deanabo on January 20, 2013 at 8:58 am said:
  
  Thank you Anne! I am excited to read yours. I really enjoy your work.
  
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Tracy on January 20, 2013 at 1:53 am said:

Strong and thought provoking, great ending.

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- deanabo on January 20, 2013 at 9:20 am said:
  
  Thank you Tracy. Im so glad you stopped by to read my work.
  
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kz on January 20, 2013 at 4:16 am said:

great poem.. oh im so thankful someone thought of a happy ending for a change ^^ lol

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- deanabo on January 20, 2013 at 9:21 am said:
  
  Thanks my writing friend! I am thankful you stopped by!
  
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yerpirate on January 20, 2013 at 12:21 pm said:

Areal fight there..very nicely described – liked the verse…

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- deanabo on January 20, 2013 at 12:47 pm said:
  
  Thanks. I look forward to your thoughts on my work.
  
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  - yerpirate on January 23, 2013 at 3:13 pm said:
    
    That’s lovely!
carolynpageabc on January 20, 2013 at 1:39 pm said:

Love this, Deana… Tells the story succinctly yet with great detail…! 🙂

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- deanabo on January 20, 2013 at 1:52 pm said:
  
  Thank you Carolyn!
  
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muZer on January 20, 2013 at 5:39 pm said:

It’s all about the attitude and the strength of character. I like how it flows and she’s a survivor. Nicely done.

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- deanabo on January 20, 2013 at 5:48 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much. It encourages me when someone understands my writing.
  
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readinpleasure on January 21, 2013 at 11:26 am said:

Wonderful

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- deanabo on January 21, 2013 at 12:01 pm said:
  
  Thanks!
  
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evilnymphstuff on January 27, 2013 at 10:12 am said:

Nice contribution! A few words but much feelings going through…

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- deanabo on January 27, 2013 at 10:40 am said:
  
  Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my work.
  
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  Thanks for the link up!
  
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