Crossing the street
Suddenly that cafe across the street looked even more inviting than it had a few moments ago. I thought to myself “one tall vanilla bean latte with 3 shots of espresso should do the trick.”.
I started across the street when I heard someone call my name. “Damn” I muttered under my breath. I was praying that Jeff didn’t hear, and hoping that if I walked faster I could pretend as if I never heard it. I didn’t recognize the voice so it should be easy to get away from.
“Veda!” There it was again, this time louder than before. I turned my head in the direction of the woman calling my name with every intention of shutting her up. The last thing I needed or wanted was for Jeff and Kelsie to know that I was anywhere near tonight’s events.
When I located the person calling my name, I smiled. It was Mrs. English. She was without a doubt the best teacher this school has ever had. I raised my hand to wave at the same time I noticed Jeff looking in my direction. He had a look of horror on his face.
At that moment I realized that I was standing in the center of the road. Out of the corner of my eye I saw the same thing that was causing Jeff’s frightened stare. Unfortunately, the car didn’t see me.
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Nice.
Thanks Kath!
Fantastic. I’m curious as to the whole backstory, but evidently that will never come. Well done.
Thanks Corinne. Here is a link to the first part of the story. (this is actually part 3) https://mythoughtsonthesubjectareasfollows.wordpress.com/2013/01/02/nerves/
I am so glad you liked it.
Oh no! What happens next!
hehe. Thanks for reading.
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You…you can’t leave it there…!
Exactly! Which Superhero will swoop down in time?
Find out next week!
We shall see…. Thanks!
I am so glad you want to read more!
Ooops … what next????
Oh no! What’s next?
Stay tuned! Thanks for reading…
I wonder what tonight’s events were and that ending, damn! Fantastic job!
Check out the previous posts in this story. Here’s the link to part one!
That is a chilling ending! Well done!
An “edge of the seat” ending, love it. Well done and thanks for sharing!
Terrific! Thank you so much!
This was great – Of course I want to know why Jeff doesn’t want her there. Equally curious as to why _he’s_ there.
Thank you! Check out the first few posts on this prompt and hopefully this answer some questions.
whew! didn’t see that one coming!
Thanks for reading!
So what’s the deal with her and Jeff? And I didn’t see that coming either. Nice build up.
Hey, if you check out the earlier post is kinda tell you what’s going on. Thank you so much for reading! https://mythoughtsonthesubjectareasfollows.wordpress.com/2013/01/02/nerves/
I got goosebumps reading it-what an image your story conjured up!
Fabulous:-)
Thanks. That comment made me happy!
🙂
Oh my! That ending was a surprise! Well done.
Thank you for reading!
Oh no! What a tragic surprise. Well done, Deana.
Thank you Imelda!
Oh wow… talk about a twist ending.
I love twist’s! Thanks for reading.
Oh Darn.. well hopefully she just ended up in the hospital instead of the morgue.
Hopefully! Thanks for reading.
Oh, that just figures. She goes to check out her old love at the reunion and just might end up roadkill instead. Way to leave a cliffhanger 🙂
Only one question: Who is Kelsie?
Kelsie is the girl in the first post that steps out of Jeff’s car. We will learn more about her later. Thank you so much for reading.
Great ending! This has us all asking questions – that’s a good thing. Wonderful build up of tension. I look forward to the next installment!
Steph! I love you for liking this story. I cant wait to write more.
I really liked your story! The setting is nicely written (and vague enough to ponder on) and I think you gave it the perfect ending.
Thank you so very much!
Whoa. What happened then? Hopefully, it’s the hospital visit, not a way to die..
more to come soon! Thank you for taking the time to read!
Wow, talk about bad Karma!
Right! Thank you for reading.
Wonderful misdirection there! I thought we were heading one way, but wham! Hit me like a truck!
Thanks.. That was what I was trying for.
Great story. Certainly caught me by surprise. Just shows you never know what’s round the corner.
Very true! Thank you , Mike, for stopping by.
Whoa. This is great. You packed a lot of suspesnse in this story before we even knew the car was coming. I’d definately like to read more of this story.
Thanks! I will be writing more soon!
I was intrigued! Then I didn’t see that coming just like she didn’t see the car. Excellent Deanabo.
Thanks Linda! Im so glad you liked it!
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Really impressive little piece! I loved it!
–Julie
Thank you so much Julie!