MY THOUGHTS ON THE SUBJECT ARE AS FOLLOWS

My truth. My life.

Core anger

My outrage for you burns hotter than the core of the earth.

You act damaged and let down because my husband chose me

over your distasteful affair.

Your disgraceful tears are pathetically irritating.

Give us 33 words from it. Interpret the prompt however you wish–literal, metaphorical, or somewhere in between. If you would like to use the image on your own blog, you must properly credit it.

Posted in adultery, anger, Poetry, Trifecta

58 thoughts on “Core anger”

joetwo on January 4, 2013 at 4:26 pm said:

Good story!

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- deanabo on January 4, 2013 at 4:30 pm said:
  
  Thank you..
  
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Gina on January 4, 2013 at 5:06 pm said:

Whoa! Strong emotions and words. I’m disgusted and angry with this person, too!

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- deanabo on January 4, 2013 at 5:07 pm said:
  
  Ha! Thats what I was going for. Thank you so much for reading!
  
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El Guapo on January 4, 2013 at 7:03 pm said:

Glad this isn’t longer. Any more anger would have put off my feed…
Well done!

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- deanabo on January 4, 2013 at 10:57 pm said:
  
  Ha! Thank you so much!
  
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Cobbie's World on January 4, 2013 at 7:42 pm said:

I sincerely hope never to appear at the far end of your bomb sights, my dear. That’s a boatload of anger ya got going on in this piece. Are you really angry or just writing “angry” really well?

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- deanabo on January 4, 2013 at 10:58 pm said:
  
  Actually I am very happy right now! Thank you so much for reading!
  
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Tara R. on January 4, 2013 at 7:43 pm said:

That was fierce.

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- deanabo on January 4, 2013 at 10:59 pm said:
  
  Thanks for reading Tara!
  
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carolynpageabc on January 4, 2013 at 8:08 pm said:

Ooooh, love it… Indignant triumph..!

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- deanabo on January 4, 2013 at 10:59 pm said:
  
  Thanks. I hoped you would like it!
  
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Corinne on January 4, 2013 at 8:14 pm said:

Incredible display of human-ness.

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- deanabo on January 4, 2013 at 10:59 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much!
  
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Dawn Lamond on January 4, 2013 at 9:02 pm said:

Hooooo-ie! She’ll never mess with you again! Very evocative.

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- deanabo on January 4, 2013 at 11:00 pm said:
  
  Ha! Thank goodness it is fiction! Thanks for reading.
  
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jannatwrites on January 4, 2013 at 9:47 pm said:

Ah, the anger comes through well. I hope this is fiction. (For your sake…and hers :))

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- deanabo on January 4, 2013 at 11:01 pm said:
  
  It is fiction! Thanks for reading.
  
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Tina on January 5, 2013 at 12:56 am said:

Contempt dripped from this. Great writing!

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- deanabo on January 5, 2013 at 5:34 pm said:
  
  Thanks Tina. I am so glad you stopped by!
  
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atrm61 on January 5, 2013 at 3:24 am said:

So glad not to be at the receiving end of this erupting lava of anger;-)Powerful writing,well done:-)

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- deanabo on January 5, 2013 at 4:28 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much! I had fun writing it!
  
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  - atrm61 on January 5, 2013 at 4:41 pm said:
    
    🙂
lumdog on January 5, 2013 at 11:00 am said:

Way to vent! Nice job. I could feel the heat!

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- deanabo on January 5, 2013 at 4:29 pm said:
  
  Thanks! I was hoping you it came across strong!
  
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Jennifer Dillon on January 5, 2013 at 12:11 pm said:

I loved the difference between outrage and just rage.

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- deanabo on January 5, 2013 at 4:29 pm said:
  
  Thanks Jennifer!
  
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Stephanie B. (@B4Steph) on January 5, 2013 at 1:35 pm said:

You’ve changed the look of your blog again. Each time it improves – IMHO. Great piece! The outrage is visceral.

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- deanabo on January 5, 2013 at 4:30 pm said:
  
  Thanks Stephanie. I had to chang it because the theme I had kept messing up. Im glad you like it!
  
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barbara on January 5, 2013 at 2:01 pm said:

*ghetto voice enters

umhmh – you go, girl! (don’t MAKE me move my head!)

way to let go some of the ubrage, Deana! 🙂

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- deanabo on January 5, 2013 at 4:31 pm said:
  
  Ha! I feel the head shaking coming on!
  
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Donna Kiser on January 5, 2013 at 3:04 pm said:

“Damaged” and “pathetically irritating,” isn’t it wonderful to be able to insult with such powerful words? 🙂
dk

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- deanabo on January 5, 2013 at 4:31 pm said:
  
  it is! Thanks for reading.
  
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billgncs on January 5, 2013 at 4:46 pm said:

wow!

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- deanabo on January 5, 2013 at 4:47 pm said:
  
  Wow good? or wow Bad?
  
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  - billgncs on January 5, 2013 at 4:53 pm said:
    
    good story, bad to be the other woman!
  - deanabo on January 5, 2013 at 4:54 pm said:
    
    Ha! Thanks. So glad you stopped by and took the time to comment!
braintomahawk on January 5, 2013 at 4:54 pm said:

Someone keeps picking at their crusty scabs.

Glad yours have healed.

Thanks for sharing!

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- deanabo on January 5, 2013 at 4:55 pm said:
  
  Thanks Friend! Im so glad you stopped by!
  
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Lance on January 5, 2013 at 5:37 pm said:

I like the strength of delivery and style.

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yerpirate on January 5, 2013 at 6:26 pm said:

Oh easily the best! Wonderful, powerful writing!

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- deanabo on January 5, 2013 at 7:00 pm said:
  
  Wow. Thank you so much for your kind words!
  
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humanTriumphant on January 5, 2013 at 11:19 pm said:

This is a great capture of the raw emotion that would be depicted by both parties.

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- deanabo on January 6, 2013 at 9:45 am said:
  
  Thank you! It was surprisingly easy to write!
  
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Sunshine on January 5, 2013 at 11:42 pm said:

ohh, i love the power of these words…:)

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- deanabo on January 6, 2013 at 9:46 am said:
  
  Thanks Sunshine! Im grateful that you stopped by to read.
  
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Draug419 on January 6, 2013 at 9:27 am said:

I can feel the emotion in this piece! Great job!

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- deanabo on January 6, 2013 at 9:49 am said:
  
  Thank you so much!
  
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Mel on January 6, 2013 at 10:58 am said:

So intense in 33 words. Great work!

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- deanabo on January 6, 2013 at 11:04 am said:
  
  Thanks Mel!
  
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kgwaite on January 6, 2013 at 2:04 pm said:

Full of hot anger. Loved this.

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- deanabo on January 6, 2013 at 2:20 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much! That makes me happy to hear!
  
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Linda Vernon on January 6, 2013 at 2:56 pm said:

Oh Very Provocative Deanabo!! As usual. And I really like your new picture! 😀

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- deanabo on January 6, 2013 at 4:30 pm said:
  
  Thank you and Thank you!
  
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Sandra on January 6, 2013 at 6:38 pm said:

Powerful–full of angst and sting!

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- deanabo on January 6, 2013 at 6:40 pm said:
  
  Thank you Sandra!
  
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Christine on January 6, 2013 at 11:35 pm said:

Holy — wow, Deana, that was intense. Fury like fire, if you ask me. Great job!

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- deanabo on January 7, 2013 at 12:34 pm said:
  
  Thanks Christine! That’s so nice to hear!
  
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