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Core anger




My outrage for you burns hotter than the core of the earth.

You act damaged and let down because my husband chose me

over your distasteful affair.

Your disgraceful tears are pathetically irritating.





Give us 33 words from it. Interpret the prompt however you wish–literal, metaphorical, or somewhere in between. If you would like to use the image on your own blog, you must properly credit it.


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58 thoughts on “Core anger

  1. Whoa! Strong emotions and words. I’m disgusted and angry with this person, too!

  2. Glad this isn’t longer. Any more anger would have put off my feed…
    Well done!

  3. Cobbie's World on said:

    I sincerely hope never to appear at the far end of your bomb sights, my dear. That’s a boatload of anger ya got going on in this piece. Are you really angry or just writing “angry” really well?

  4. That was fierce.

  5. Ooooh, love it… Indignant triumph..!

  6. Incredible display of human-ness.

  7. Hooooo-ie! She’ll never mess with you again! Very evocative.

  8. Ah, the anger comes through well. I hope this is fiction. (For your sake…and hers :))

  9. Contempt dripped from this. Great writing!

  10. So glad not to be at the receiving end of this erupting lava of anger;-)Powerful writing,well done:-)

  11. Way to vent! Nice job. I could feel the heat!

  12. I loved the difference between outrage and just rage.

  13. You’ve changed the look of your blog again. Each time it improves – IMHO. Great piece! The outrage is visceral.

  14. *ghetto voice enters

    umhmh – you go, girl! (don’t MAKE me move my head!)

    way to let go some of the ubrage, Deana! 🙂

  15. “Damaged” and “pathetically irritating,” isn’t it wonderful to be able to insult with such powerful words? 🙂

  16. Someone keeps picking at their crusty scabs.

    Glad yours have healed.

    Thanks for sharing!

  17. I like the strength of delivery and style.

  18. Oh easily the best! Wonderful, powerful writing!

  19. This is a great capture of the raw emotion that would be depicted by both parties.

  20. ohh, i love the power of these words…:)

  21. Draug419 on said:

    I can feel the emotion in this piece! Great job!

  22. So intense in 33 words. Great work!

  23. Full of hot anger. Loved this.

  24. Oh Very Provocative Deanabo!! As usual. And I really like your new picture! 😀

  25. Powerful–full of angst and sting!

  26. Holy — wow, Deana, that was intense. Fury like fire, if you ask me. Great job!

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