Innocence return
For many years I have waited.
Waited for you to return to me as you promised.
The more time that passes, you slip further away.
The anger and rage I feel from your betrayal is eating away at my insides.
I expected more from you. I thought I knew your soul.
I can’t continue to exist in this way. The lack of your breath suffocates me.
I can see you staring back at me from the mirror.
I know you are in there somewhere.
Innocence come back to me.
Note: This was a challenge for Picture it and Write
http://ermiliablog.wordpress.com/category/picture-it-write/
You have to write something on a picture that they post.
Glad you did this, because I would’ve thought this was amy lee of evanescence making sure her makeup was right for the video shoot.
great flow and emotional impact, bo
Ha! Thanks Dear.
nice. i was thinking you were going with youth. maybe that’s just me projecting myself. 😉
Youth would have been great in here as well. I am just in a funk mood today! Thanks for reading.
This is interesting post and I liked the song meme that you started. Can anybody else participate in it?
Thanks! I copied the Meme from a friend of mine. You are welcome to do it! I cant wait to read what you write.
You have worked on the picture really well … good words here !!!
Thank you so much! That is nice to hear.
I love the dramatic and deep tone to this poem and it’s certainly something I can relate to. Great work!
Thank you! That is nice to hear!
I really like this line: “The lack of your breath suffocates me” I had no idea she was yearning for innocence until the last line, yet when I read it again knowing this, it made perfect sense.
Thank you so much for reading!
That’s very good. I especially like the line about the lack of breath suffocating.
Thank you so much!
Ooo, lovely! Very sinister and dramatic. I like how she’s trying to coax it back. I loved your perspective on this week’s picture. Thanks for contributing!
– Ermisenda
Thank you so much! Its scary how easy this was for me to write.
Nice job writing to the reflection.
Thanks Anne
Nice twist at the end.
Thank you Elliot!
Oh, I love that…. How true that can be… Well done.. 🙂
Thank you for reading!