Kiss me

11 Feb 2013

30 Comments

Kiss me

Kiss me.

Lay your yearning into me

with one perfect moment.

Help the world disapper

as your lips absorb mine.

Never let go of the grasp

you have on my heart.

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30 thoughts on “Kiss me”

ramblingsfromamum on February 11, 2013 at 5:31 am said:

Perfectly captured D.

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- deanabo on February 11, 2013 at 5:37 am said:
  
  Thank you!
  
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Lance on February 11, 2013 at 5:33 am said:

very sexy

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- deanabo on February 11, 2013 at 5:37 am said:
  
  Thanks, I had a good muse…
  
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oasien on February 11, 2013 at 5:49 am said:

Le baiser est une étape importante, il marque le début d’une relation, la rencontre sensuelle entre deux corps. Témoignage de tendresse par excellence, c’est aussi l’ingrédient indispensable des préliminaires amoureux.
Embrasser, c’est tout un art. Cependant, il n’existe pas de règles en matière de baiser, ni de baiser standard : l’essentiel est d’y mettre son cœur. Un baiser réussi, c’est un instant où deux bouches entrent en communion, ce quelle que soit la technique employée.

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- deanabo on February 11, 2013 at 6:14 am said:
  
  Vous êtes très bon dans tes mots. Un baiser peut faire faire ou défaire une relation d’aucune sorte.
  
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  - oasien on February 11, 2013 at 6:37 am said:
    
    En effet, un petit baiser a une grande influence, ne serait-ce qu’un geste de la main.
Robyn Greenhouse on February 11, 2013 at 8:15 am said:

Help the world disappear – love this line!

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- deanabo on February 11, 2013 at 11:21 am said:
  
  Thank you Robyn..
  
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Renee TennisMcKinley (@2old2tap) on February 11, 2013 at 8:29 am said:

Very nice! The intimacy of the moment is perfectly pictured.

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- deanabo on February 11, 2013 at 11:21 am said:
  
  Thank you Renee!
  
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Berowne on February 11, 2013 at 10:41 am said:

Tender and kind of idyllic..

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- deanabo on February 11, 2013 at 11:22 am said:
  
  Thank you.
  
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Little Nell on February 11, 2013 at 11:53 am said:

Ah that kiss that makes the world disappear…it helps when their eyes are closed of course. Lovely poem.

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- deanabo on February 11, 2013 at 4:35 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much!
  
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Helen Dehner on February 11, 2013 at 12:31 pm said:

Kisses like these do indeed make the world go away …..

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- deanabo on February 11, 2013 at 4:35 pm said:
  
  Thank you Helen!
  
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randomaveragegirl on February 11, 2013 at 12:39 pm said:

Beautifully written

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- deanabo on February 11, 2013 at 4:36 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much
  
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Karen Sather (@swirlgal01) on February 11, 2013 at 2:35 pm said:

I do believe she’s caught him for keeps!

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- deanabo on February 11, 2013 at 4:36 pm said:
  
  Hopefully so!
  
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Sue Anderson on February 11, 2013 at 2:40 pm said:

Never let go of the grasp you have on my heart.

I like the point of view there.

=)

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- deanabo on February 11, 2013 at 4:36 pm said:
  
  Thank you Sue!
  
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muZer on February 11, 2013 at 4:52 pm said:

So beautiful and enchanting.

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Susan on February 11, 2013 at 8:19 pm said:

Perfect in its yearning … ‘make the world go away’ … ahhhh ….

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- deanabo on February 11, 2013 at 8:22 pm said:
  
  Thank you Susan!
  
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jenlefeverwood on February 12, 2013 at 9:12 pm said:

I’m so behind on my reading!! I just got to this.. and I love it darling! ~Jen

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- deanabo on February 12, 2013 at 9:16 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much!
  
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hypercryptical on February 14, 2013 at 6:11 pm said:

Love it when the world disappears in a kiss (I remember it well…).

Anna ]

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- deanabo on February 14, 2013 at 8:29 pm said:
  
  It is a wonderful moment!
  
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